Review-lite
…because…*shrug* 🤷
- Lauren, the bouncy, super-enthusiastic and unbelievable thirty-something reaches the peak of her journey to becoming a submissive in this one with a ‘collaring ceremony’
- We’re not super-convinced about the whole dome-sub dynamic being ‘equal’ despite the best efforts by the author to convince the reader about this
- Find the relationship particularly imbalanced because more than once Quinn says that as the domme she got to ‘help’ (or actually write) what Lauren will say in the collaring ceremony, which is positioned as equivalent to a marriage in the kinky world
- Better dialogue than in the previous two parts but still quite unnatural
- Unbelievable conversations between Lauren and her friends
- The relationship between Lauren and Quinn also seems strangely wooden and stilted
- Heads-up: much less sex in this one than expected from Hayes (but then, Lix 2 has a surfeit of sex)
⭐⭐★
